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How to prove an impressive achievement on an application
How to describe the work behind a substantial achievement and, where it helps, add a supervisor's view so admissions readers can trust what you contributed.
SourceBased on what we at Aristo learned from the Stanford admissions office.

Admissions readers at selective colleges are trained to be skeptical, and in the Stanford office we learned from, new readers were even screened for it. They know every applicant is trying to persuade them, and they know most sixteen-year-olds are not yet serious scholars or nonprofit founders. So when a file claims something impressive and the writing never touches it, or touches it lightly, the reader's private verdict is blunt: they don't believe it.
That verdict rarely appears anywhere the family will see, which is why so few learn it happened. The student who really did found the organization or publish the research is read as one more teenager inflating a line, and the doubt spreads to everything around it. The first step is knowing which activities draw that suspicion.
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